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Daniel S.
9/13/2013 05:48:53 am
When I grow up I want to be a animal trainer because I want animals to be smart.I have a dog named Hershey and I try to train him but he doesn't understand.When I trained him I thought of the other trainers,then I went to the zoo and saw how to train sea lions and then I went to the school's library and read about how to train dogs.I read it all day then I wanted to be a trainer for animals.That's why I want to be a trainer for animals.
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Mia M
9/13/2013 06:04:33 am
It's really cool I didn't even think of that.
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dianad
9/20/2013 09:04:59 am
that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute
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anelisa
9/20/2013 01:46:31 pm
you are dum and fat and look like a rat
Mia M
9/13/2013 05:58:35 am
When I grow up,I want to be a hair stillest and do people's hair.
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Daniel.s
9/13/2013 06:03:06 am
I think your story is great because you win a lot of money
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Edgar R.
9/13/2013 06:13:54 am
When I grow up I want to be a FBI agents because they fight for the goverment.They fight for the president of the United States.
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Mia M
9/13/2013 06:14:53 am
I like it it's cool
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Isaac.m
9/13/2013 06:14:09 am
I want to be a wrestler because you get to be a champion and you get a lot of fans and go around the world.
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luz m.
9/13/2013 06:14:31 am
When I grow up, I want to be a chef. I want to be a chef because I like cooking and pastry to.I like all the receipes because it says to put eggs or water sometimes.That is one of the reasons why I want to be a chef.
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